Tuesday, January 16, 2018

[English translation] 江山雪 - Snow over Rivers and Mountains

作曲/編曲//Composer/arrangement: KIDE
後期//Post production: E
作詞//Lyrics:荀夜羽 (Xun Ye Yu)
原唱//Original vocal:小愛的媽 (Xiao Ai’s mom/Xiao Ai De Ma)
特邀念白//Narrators:阿冊 (A Ce), 柒夜 (Qi Ye)
演唱//Vocal (cover):蚊香 (Wen Xiang)
混音//Mix:Mr曾經 (Mr Ceng Jing)

Other covers:
(And many more available on Youtube)


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純則粹 陽則剛 天行健 兩儀遵道恆長 故有長久者不自生方長生之講
Pure in essence, stark in strength
Heaven runs diligently, two states in constant obedience of nature’s law Hence there’s the saying, longevity favors those who do no egoistic self-preservation


百丈峰 松如浪
地勢坤 厚德載物之像
故君子不爭炎涼

Pine trees rose like waves upon peaks a hundred meters tall The earthy landscape contains within itself all virtues and matters Like so, a gentleman does not concern himself with trifles


混沌開 分陰陽
輪轉更迭萬物始蒼蒼
觀其微妙於九天之下六合八荒

Primordial chaos split into Yin and Yang
Only through its changes in cycles can all lives flourish
Do observe its intricacies, under the heavens, in this universe


春生 入秋藏
天之道四時更迭有常
若有常為何晨曦比這夜還涼

Birthed in spring, hidden in autumn
Heaven’s law changes with a rhythm of certainty
If there should be certainty, why is dawn colder than this very night?


若無常 為何我總會想
與你 守月滿空山雪照窗

If there naught be certainty, why am I constantly drawn to the thought
Of waiting on the moon with you, snow reflecting light through our windows in the vacuous mountains?


[Narration]
大道無形,生育天地;大道無情,運行日月;大道無名,長養萬物。

Dao is shapeless, birthing heaven and earth; Dao is loveless, moving both sun and moon; Dao is nameless, nurturing all lives.


一念坐忘 趁月光
聽 清風追逐流雲纏綿飛舞的癡狂
交錯的剎那 生怕洩露心頭沉淪的慌
微漾

I thought of meditating while the moon still shines
And listen to winds chase the streaming clouds, entwined in a dancing frenzy
At the moment we intersected, I feared that the panic from my heart’s fall would be revealed
As a subtle ripple


[Narration]

吾不知其名,強名曰道。
夫道者:有清有濁,有動有靜;天清地濁,天動地靜; 降本流末,而生萬物。
清者,濁之源,動者,靜之基;人能常清靜,天地悉皆歸。

Its name I know not, Dao is the name assumed.

Dao, defined as such: it encompasses the clear and the murky, the moving and the still; heaven is clear while the earth murky, heaven moves while the earth is still; it descends from its source and flows to its end, thus birthing lives in tens of thousands.

The clear is the source of the murky; the moving, foundation of the still; should one stays oft in clarity and stillness, heaven and earth shall be his to own.


未曾忘 蒙昧時授我出世方(君卻重入塵浪)
如何渡暖意 才能化盡你眼底 千山月下霜(將眷戀深藏)
揮劍 斬痴念萬丈(已決意相忘)
卻 輸給回眸一望

I’ve never forgotten, in my ignorant days, who taught me the way out of mortal’s entanglements (yet you returned to its tumbling dust)
How shall this warmth be delivered, to melt away mountain frost under the moon, beneath your eyes (hiding all your longings deep within)
I raised my sword, and severed my overwhelming lengths of obsession (already decided to forget one another)
Yet my defeat was spelled, when you cast a glance back at me


曲中全 直藏枉
盛世於斯須間興亡
有誰能與天數相抗
逆轉世態炎涼

Wholesomeness within the crooked, vanity concealed in the righteous
The glorious world rises and falls in passing moments
Who can oppose heaven’s will
And reverse the state of this world?


都說
心欲靜 更難放
何時起光陰 與心意
放縱如 白駒
肯收韁

It’s been said
The heart yearning stillness finds it harder to let go
Since when, time itself, together with my heart
Bolted like a white colt
Still I refuse to draw its reins


[Narration]
情不敢至深 恐大夢一場
卦不敢算盡 畏天道無常

Love I dare not let run deep, fearing it should be merely an elaborate dream
Entirety of my fortunes I dare not predict, fearing heaven’s uncertainty


時有序 世滄桑
天地將傾時誰保 誰無恙
指上訣 念念入心藏

There is order in time, and vicissitudes in the world
When heaven and earth topple, who can promise whose safety
Incantations upon my fingers, I chanted till it’s kept by heart


君為刃 吾便以此身 為盾防
仗劍鎮山河護 你無恙

If you shall be a blade, then this body of mine I’ll make the shield
Wielding a sword to surmount the land, so that I may protect you, safe and well


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Translator’s comment:

I did this because I happen to enjoy dropping boulders directly above my feet.

Also, I’m in my pop culture Taoism phase. And I can’t say I don’t enjoy a bit of a challenge.

This is really not an easy one to work with. Lots of references to Taoist literature, so I try to go back to the sources and translate to the best of my ability. Some philosophical concepts are difficult to convey in full. E.g. For “the earthy landscape” (地勢坤), the word “坤” is a somewhat nebulous concept. It’s one of the symbols of the Ba Gua (Eight Diagrams) from the earliest surviving Chinese literature, the I Ching. It can mean the earth (as oppose to the heavens), or the feminine (as opposed to the masculine), or the southwest direction.

Downside number two: I’m not very well-read in Taoist literature and doctrine, so I only know some of the more superficial aspects of it.

This song contains a mix of pop culture Taoism. It was originally composed as an homage to a Chinese MMORPG (劍俠情緣叁 or 剑网三). One of the sects, the Chun Yang Sect (纯阳), takes inspiration from Taoism, and the characters are modeled after Taoist priests and priestesses. (The song “A Taoist Nun Friend of Mine” is also inspired by events in the same game, by the way.) So the first line “纯则粹 阳则刚” probably serves more as a reference to the game than providing much actual meaning.

I especially like these lines from the original sources:

天行健,君子以自强不息。
地势坤,君子以厚德载物。
——《周易》

"Like the diligence of heaven, a gentleman should be relentless in improving one self.
Like the nurturing earth, a gentleman should cultivate good virtues and be accepting of all matters."
- I Ching

Thursday, November 16, 2017

[English translation] 醉 - Drunken

作曲 : 徐夢圓 (Xu Meng Yuan)
作詞 : 溫莨 (Wen Liang)


*There are a few covers of this song, and the original video I planned to embed had been taken down from Youtube when I was working on the translation, for reasons unknown. Anyway, here's the same video from Bilibili, the original uploading site, if I'm not mistaken.

三无 (San Wu's Cover): https://www.bilibili.com/video/av8807514/
冷鸢 (Leng Yuan's Cover): https://www.bilibili.com/video/av8673782/
Alternate Youtube video (without the music video): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U38W1a_XCtE

EDIT: San Wu uploaded her cover with the music video on her official channel - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dRmgw-apIug
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小城裡 有一位 姑娘
撐起傘 過雨巷
裙角惹丁香



In this little town, there was a young maiden
She held an umbrella while passing through the rainy alleys
Corners of her dress stole the scent of cloves


一步走 一步向回望
泛皺的 眼波裡 掩映著溫柔鄉

With every step forth she glimpsed back
Ripples in her eyes hid a gentle realm


也許是 風兒輕輕撞
這雨水 悄搖晃 晃進了時光

Perhaps it’s the wind gently knocking
rain quietly swaying, that ushered me back in time


還在想 吟誦詩兩行
那身影 早已經 轉身繞過花牆

I was only about to recite a line of poem or two
when that figure disappeared round the corner of a flowered wall


門樓旁 倚著老街坊
半支小調哼著唱
唱伊人何方

Leaning on the shops by the ancient streets
humming half a little tune
“where should you be” I sung


一雙眼 已泛起濁黃
你卻仍 似過往
那般婉兮清揚

Eyes already tinged with a murky yellow
Yet you remained, as always
That graceful and lovely


雨傘下 是故人模樣
世間事無常
還是一夢黃粱

Under the umbrella was your likeness of old
Unforeseeable and fleeting, as this world goes
or is it but a dream of mine


出弄巷 聞見了杜康
歲月長 又何妨
半醒好相忘

Out of the alley, I smelled the gift of the god of wine
Why be bothered by the tedium of years ahead?
Being half-awake’s conducive for forgetfulness


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一雙眼 已泛起濁黃
你卻仍 似過往
那般婉兮清揚

Eyes already tinged with a murky yellow
Yet you remained, as always
That graceful and lovely


雨傘下 是故人模樣
世間事無常
還是一夢黃粱

Under the umbrella was your likeness of old
Unforeseeable and fleeting, as this world goes
or is it but a dream of mine

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小城裡 有一位 姑娘
撐起傘 過雨巷
裙角惹丁香



In this little town, there was a young maiden
She held an umbrella while passing through the rainy alleys
Corners of her dress stole the scent of cloves


一步走 一步向回望
泛皺的 眼波裡 掩映著溫柔鄉

With every step forth she glimpsed back
Ripples in her eyes hid a gentle realm


也許是 風兒輕輕撞
這雨水 悄搖晃 晃進了時光

Perhaps it’s the wind gently knocking
Rain quietly swaying, that ushered me back in time


還在想 吟誦詩兩行
那身影早已轉身繞過了花牆

I was only about to recite a line of poem or two
When that figure disappeared round the corner of a flowered wall


天微亮 漸白的東方
三寸光 透過窗
送你出舊巷

Dawn broke, with the brightening eastern horizon
Inches of light seeped through the window
To send you out of the old alleyway


一步走 一步向回望
泛皺的眼波裡 似有萬語深藏

With every step forth you glimpsed back
Ripples in your eyes hid much that was unspoken


也許是路遠巷狹長
這目光 露鋒芒 卻猝不及防
似誓要 揭穿所有謊
卻輕易 在心上 劃下了一道癢

Perhaps it was a road too far, an alley too harrowing
Sharp glimmers in those eyes struck me unprepared
As if vowing to uncover all my lies
But instead carved an itch upon my heart effortlessly


又聞見 婆婆的佳釀
一縷纏綿繞鼻香
驚醒了孟浪

Again I smelled grandma’s fine brew
A sweet, lingering trail of scent
That startled me from my careless preoccupations


猶記得 貪杯把酒嘗
三杯二壺一壇
再無力伴斜陽

I still remember being driven to the wine
Three cups, two flagons, then one jug
No longer able to accompany the setting sun


出酒坊 醉在柳樹旁
應是日有所想 太虛境游一場

Stumbling out of the winehouse, I collapsed by the willow tree
Suppose one’s obsession by day manifested itself in the realm of dreams


卻無恙 回到這間房
桌案上 靜靜放 一碗紅豆湯

Yet I find myself comfortably back in this room
And on my table quietly sits a bowl of red bean soup


小城裡 有一位 姑娘
撐起傘 過雨巷
裙角惹丁香



In this little town, there was a young maiden
She held an umbrella while passing through the rainy alleys
Corners of her dress stole the scent of cloves


一步走 一步向回望
泛皺的 眼波裡 掩映著溫柔鄉

With every step forth she glimpsed back
Ripples in her eyes hid a gentle realm


也許是 風兒輕輕撞
這雨水 悄搖晃 晃進了時光

Perhaps it’s the wind gently knocking
Rain quietly swaying, that ushered me back in time


還在想 吟誦詩兩行
那身影早已轉身繞過了花牆

I was only about to recite a line of poem or two
When that figure disappeared round the corner of a flowered wall


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Story 

*Written by a fan in the comments, not sure if it's canon but here goes:


如今的上海動盪不安,當看到報紙上的新聞時,我不禁又回憶起了那個女孩。
隨著回憶的深陷,恍惚之間,好似又回到與她初遇的那天……
淅淅瀝瀝的小雨打濕了上海的弄巷,也打濕了我的心。
那天,我教書結束準備回家,在學校門口的小巷中,她持傘而過。
那曼妙的身姿,動人心弦的眼睛,我被其深深的吸引了。
等我從她回望時的溫柔眼神中清醒過來時,她已消失在了花牆的轉角。
那是我和她的初遇,無論何時想起都還記憶尤新。
後來,我終於再度在學校的門口遇見了她。
我邀請她進學校談話,發現她是個愛國情懷豐富的女子。
這樣的她,更加令我癡迷。
我倆相談甚歡,也稱得上志同道合。
然而,那時的上海頗為動亂,叛國投日的漢奸終於注意到了我們。
不得已,我們只能分開逃離。
離別之際,不,如今想來,那並不能稱為離別。
她為了讓我能順利離開,主動暴露了身份,偽軍把她抓了起了。
我逃離了偽軍的抓捕,帶著她留給我的書信和一根白色的羽毛。
她被抓的那天,是我哭的最傷心的一天。
心裡翻騰著說不出的滋味。
我才是那個應該被抓捕的人,她是無辜的。
她在最危機的時刻代替我被捕,而我……
婆婆釀造的酒香把我從回憶中拉了回來,常言道,日有所思夜有所夢。
屋內桌子上的那碗紅豆湯,卻仍是毫無徵兆的刺痛了我。
側眼報紙,報導的是如今的上海,雖然已經不像幾年前那番動亂,但也不是記憶中的上海。
物是人非,什麼都變了。
當我放下報紙,走上如今上海空曠的街道時,卻是說不上來的空虛。
漫無目的的行走著,行走著……
直到那抹熟悉的陌生的身影映入眼簾,我的眼睛再也****酸澀,眼淚止不住的流了下來。
歌舞廳的門口,一身華麗小姐服飾的正在招攬著客人。
當初清純的她已經被偽軍處死在了我的回憶中。
丁香花終究還是落入凡塵,即便是她,也依舊沒有逃離如今上海的黑暗。
望著她的身影,淚流不止的我卻無法張口喊出她的名字。
那個我永遠也不會忘記的名字,如今,卻變得格外的沉重。
終於,忙於招攬客人的她注意到了我,也終於認出了我是誰。
目光交合時,她已淚流滿面。
我和她,四目相對,淚流不止,卻久久沒有言語……



These are perilous times in the city of Shanghai. Peering down at the latest reports in the papers, I couldn’t help but to recall memories of that girl.

I found myself back on the very first day we met. Soft drizzle pattered down on the narrow alleys of Shanghai. Not only did it strike the wet pavements, my heart too, had not been spared.

I had just concluded teaching sessions for the day. In the alleyway outside our school gate, she walked passed with an umbrella over her head. That graceful poise, mesmerizing eyes, I couldn’t help but to fall for her. Just when I snapped out of her enchanted gaze, she disappeared around the corner of a flowered wall.

That was our first encounter. No matter when these memories come back to me, it stays perennially fresh in my mind.

I met her again at the school gate some time later. I invited her into the school for a friendly conversation and uncovered a strong patriotic spirit in her. That only left me even more infatuated. We got along splendidly, our ideals a close match.

Unfortunately, those were tumultuous times in Shanghai. We attracted the attention of traitors working for the Japanese. We had to part ways and run.

That was our farewell. No, in retrospect, you couldn’t quite call it a farewell.

She revealed herself to the enemies to ensure my safe escape. They had her captured, while I escaped with the letter and a single white feather she left me. I wept bitterly that day. Words cannot articulate the feeling that wretched and twisted in my heart. I was supposed to be the one. She was innocent. At the most critical moment, she took my place, but I…...

The smell of grandma’s brewed wine pulled me out of my reminiscences. As the saying goes, an obsession by day manifest in dreams by night. That bowl of red bean soup sitting on the table at home now a subtle thorn in me.

I gave the papers a sidelong glance. It wrote about the Shanghai today. Not as dangerous as it had been, but neither was it the Shanghai I remembered.

Objects, inanimate things, may remain. Not people though -- those had changed.

I put down the newspapers and strolled the empty streets of Shanghai. Without any particular destination in mind, I walked, and walked. Till that familiar figure entered my sight.

My eyes soured, and the tears couldn’t stop from there on.

At the nightclub’s entrance, a girl in an extravagant dress attended to her guests. I then realized, that innocent girl I knew had long been executed. The clove flower had fallen unto dusty earth in the end. Even she couldn’t escape the darkness that shrouded this city.

I couldn’t bring myself to call out her name. That name I’ll never forget has now become far too heavy.

Alas, she noticed me, and she recognized me.

When our eyes met, tears ran down her cheeks. It stayed that way for a long time, none of us uttering a single word.


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This time I wanted to try something different from the usual styles. I liked the lyrics the first time I looked it up because of its evocative imagery. Plus, the electronic music mixed with historical themes here's pretty awesome.


*I own nothing but the translations.