Friday, September 22, 2017

[English translation] 半壶纱 - Half an Urn of Yarn




作詞/Lyrics:劉珂矣 (Liu KeYi),百慕三石 (BaiMu SanShi)
作曲/Music:劉珂矣 百慕三石
編曲/Arrangement:百慕三石


墨已入水 渡一池青花
揽五分红霞 采竹回家
悠悠风来 埋一地桑麻
一身袈裟 把相思放下

Into the water ink had slipped, traversing a pond of blue-white porcelain;
Taking evening’s scarlet hue, I picked my bamboos and set for home;
A lazy breeze whiffed by, burying a floor of mulberry and hemp;
With a kasaya donned, my reminiscence had been laid to rest.


十里桃花 待嫁的年华
凤冠的珍珠 挽进头发
檀香拂过 玉镯弄轻纱
空留一盏 芽色的清茶

Peach blossom bloomed in three miles length, in years of youth, a marriageable age;
Pearls from the bridal headdress gently tucked into my hair;
Sweeping past was sandalwood scent, as jade bangles teased the soft yarn worn;
Alas, only a little cup of tea remained.


倘若我心中的山水 你眼中都看到
我便一步一莲花祈祷
怎知那浮生一片草 岁月催人老
风月花鸟 一笑尘缘了

If your eyes could perceive the landscape of my heart,
With every lotus step I’ll pray for your sake;
It’s regrettable, the plights of mortals, lives akin to a field of grass, aging made haste by the passing years;
Let it be then, superfluities like the wind, the moon, the flowers, the birds; with a careless smile, we draw closure to our mortal ties.


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Footnotes:

1. Li = 500m
10 Li (十里) = 5000 meters = ~3 miles

2. 芽色 Im not sure what exactly does this mean. means sprout, or a tender shoot, basically young plants. Since its used to describe tea, Im guessing its somewhere between a light green color and the color of straw? Anyway, I omitted that phrase from the translation above.


Translator’s notes:
So yeah, it’s another one of those it’s-pretty-vague-so-just-enjoy-the-imagery type of lyrics. (Either that or I’m not able to comprehend or appreciate them fully.) I’ve rendered quite a lot of my own interpretations and word preferences to make the translated language ring better, so take them with a grain of salt. It may not be completely accurate, but it’s fun when I try to make them sound nice in English.


*I own nothing but the translations.

8 comments:

  1. Amazing! I remeber to ask you for the translation of this song and you just do it, and looking in to your blog i just seen all the songs you have translated, are songs that i really love! Amazing job!

    我只想说,太感谢你啦!五体投地!

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    1. You're most welcome! I was already interested in translating this song some time ago, so that helped too ;> 不客气!

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  2. good music, thank you for the translation

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  3. I am an Indian and listening to this song..... What a beautiful song

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    1. Indeed, love the singer's voice. Glad you liked it!

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  4. Thanks so much for the translation! What is this song about?

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    1. Hey there j! You're most welcome, it was fun to translate. I'm not entirely sure if there's a definite message behind it, but based on Baidu the song intends to evoke an atmosphere of "Zen", being at peace with the world (first and second stanza), time, and the creature that inhabit within (third stanza). At least, that's my crude take on it.

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